Most characters did not even get first names.
I can get past the grammatical mistakes, but the story is really lacking and that I cannot ignore.
Too much time was wasted in actually setting up the online dating profiles before anything happened.
Does it make you talented? Ah, what a cute story.
All the characters were really flat.
It is however no worse than being clinically underweight yet the latter is lauded as beautiful while the former is a byword for ugly, monstrous and evil.